Mojo’s cover journey, part 2

2009 January 30
by Moriah Jovan

Thank you for your continuing indulgence on the travails of designing a cover if you’re not a designer of covers. As I said last week, it took me almost a year and a lot of hours of Photoshopping to come to the cover I did, which I affectionately call “The Bewbies.” Originally, The Proviso was one book and it was enormous. I originally titled it Barefoot Through Fire. Then I figured I’d probably do better to split it out into 3 parts, 1 part per romance. This is the story of book 2.

Zoe commented last week that “Canned Heat” (the original title of book 1) is a favorite song of hers. Well, it’s a favorite of mine, too, and that’s how I came to name it that. It fit the couple. So in keeping with the song names theme, I originally named book 2 (couple #2—so Dating Game) “Dulcissime,” which is an aria from Carl Orff’s Carmina Burana. Trust me, it fit. This cover, however, did not, so…you can see I abandoned that right quick. I remember doing that the same day I did the yellow one (the mostest ickiest one in my previous post).

Well, I hauled out a picture a friend of mine took, which I bought the licensing rights to a gazillion eons ago when I wanted to use it for a different project. (Ignore the purple blotches on the small one and pretend it’s got “Dulcissime” on the front, ’k?) Oh, that was a pretty cover. Showed it to Dude (who was in the midst of reading that particular couple) and he said, “Too girly.” I said, “Yeah, but isn’t it pretty?” He said, “Yeah. That’s my point.” Okay, got it.

Finally, I decided to ditch the “Dulcissime” (because I’m the only one in the world who’d understand it and once Dude said, “How do you pronounce it?” I knew it wouldn’t work) and went for the ORIGINAL original title of that novel’s concept (which had been a stand-alone bouncing around in my brain for years): Morning in Bed. Now, those of you who’ve read The Proviso will know what this refers to; for those of you who haven’t, I’ll not spoil you. Anyway, see above graphic and explanation.

Then I decided to go with a Kansas City theme. Naturally! I showed it to Dude, who said, “Mmmm, yeah, I like it” in a rather unenthusiastic tone of voice. I said, “Okay, what’s the problem?” He said, “It doesn’t stand out. I wouldn’t notice that in a bookstore.”

But this would! And it fits unbelievably well with the story. Problem: It was done in 2002 and is therefore under copyright and, while I was willing to pay whatever I had to pay to get that perfect man on my now-perfect cover with the now-perfect title, I couldn’t find the artist. Anywhere. I called freaking Canada. Twice. You should see my phone bill. Okay, so artist has disappeared off the face of the earth. I wept.

Then it didn’t matter. No matter how much I wanted that art, I couldn’t use it anyway once I decided to reassemble my story under one cover. Like Lilith, this image represented only one of the major characters and I needed something more inclusive. I’m still weeping.

Next week, the covers for couple #3.

7 Responses leave one →
  1. 2009 January 30

    Heh. You should have used the drawing of the man anyway. If the artist sees it and has a problem with its use, then let HIM find YOU.

  2. 2009 January 30
    robinaltman permalink

    I’m with J.M.. If you tried that hard to find the artist, screw it. It’s like finding a stray dog. You try to find the owners, but if they don’t see your ad in the paper or the fliers around the neighborhood, it’s over.

    I really liked the Kansas City theme, but when you reported Dude’s complaint, I looked at it again, and thought he was right. He’s got a really good eye.

    Could you have an artist draw you a version of the picture you liked, (same 2 people, same perspective, same charcoal, etc.)? Then it would truly be yours. You can’t copyright a guy carrying a girl as seen from the back.

  3. 2009 January 30

    LOL @ you two.

    Thing is, even though I love that art (and yes, I was about 65% convinced I was going to use it regardless of my inability to find the artist), it only represents one of the main characters, so…

    …that was a no-go anyway once I put the 3 storylines together.

  4. 2009 January 31

    Yep…The Bewbies is still my favorite. The Naked Dewd is a seriously awesome drawing, though. You should save it for a different book.

  5. 2009 January 31

    Kel, I KNOW. Hawt. But you can see why I couldn’t use it for the big book.

  6. 2009 January 31

    You like “Canned Heat” too? Awesome! Now I have to Youtube it and listen to it again haha.

    And I love watching how your covers evolve!

    I think I’m going to start picking my covers by reader vote. Doing a few different designs, and whatever flies with the most readers is what I’m going with.

  7. 2009 February 1

    Yes, I love Canned Heat. I heard it the first time on the movie Center Stage, which I love because it has dancing in it. I’ll watch the most horrible movies ever made *koffSalsakoff* as long as it has dancing it is and I’ll think they’re all wonderful.

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